Gabriella Torres
JOU 1100
Professor Naumova
March 2, 2017
Sergey Kislyak, Russian Envoy, Cultivated Powerful Network in U.S. (NY Times)
Sergey I. Kislyak, the longtime Russian ambassador to the United States, hosted a dazzling dinner in his three-story, Beaux-Arts mansion four blocks north of the White House to toast Michael A. McFaul just weeks before he took up his post as the American envoy to Russia
Type: Immediate-Identification lead
This was a very efficiently written lead and very effective because immediate identification leads are meant to capture attention because they are often based on famous/ important people so I found it immediately eye catching and wanted to read the article even though I had no previous knowledge of Sergey Kislyak.
Women charged with murder in killing of North Korean leader's half brother (CNN)
Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia (CNN)Two women accused of killing the estranged half brother of North Korean leader Kim Jong Un were charged with murder Wednesday.
Type: Multiple - Element lead
I found this lead to be very effective because it worked quite a bit of information into the first paragraph without being overbearing and hard for the reader to understand.
- A simple plea: Let’s have Oscar-worthy movies in theaters all year, not just during awards season (The Washington Post)
Over the past 20 years, awards season has become an effective business model for small and mid-budget movies that otherwise might not get made within Hollywood’s blockbuster-centric system. When “Shakespeare in Love” won best picture way back in 1998, a new marketing tactic was born, one that leveraged public awareness throughout the run-up to the Oscars — culminating, if you’re lucky, in a big win on the night — to get free publicity for smart, adult-oriented movies without having to spend millions on big TV campaigns.
Type: Summary Lead
Though it was easy to identify the type of lead this article was going for I found it to be too wordy and not containing enough inverted pyramid information (who, what, when, why) to classify as a well written lead.
Hi Gaby,
ReplyDeleteI think that the first lead is most effective. The second and third are less effective as the second could have used more information as to who those women are while the third could have been shorter.
Nice article btw :)
ReplyDeleteGood leads
ReplyDeleteBrian, this is not a comment I asked you to make! You are saving your time and effort but you are missing a chance for a good grade for the course. You must work much more seriously.
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ReplyDeletethis was well put together and your leads are coordinating.
ReplyDelete-Merlande Dormevil
The most important is to create such a lead that would provoke a reader to follow reading and make the rest of the story shine.
ReplyDeleteNice lead well put together.
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